Monday, 17 October 2011

Final Draft of Investigation Essay

Today we handed in our last drafts, although we may get a later chance to amend small improvements.
I mainly spent my time making small ammendments to my essay according to my teachers notes; this included grammar improvements and writing more concise sentences.
My last draft was graded a D, which I agreed with but really wanted to improve on. I think that this draft might be a low C but I would like to do another draft tp try and get a high B.

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