Second Draft Feedback

Positive Comments:

• Conventional of the Genre
• Good Information, Informative
• Clear Structure
• Reality Element Creates Interest
• Good Planning
• Good Music
• Good Concept/Narrative
• Good Editing
• Good Use of Split Screen
• Appropriate Dress Codes
• 'Crime 2 Court' Title Screen is Original
• Nice Voice Over
• Realistic Representation of Police

To Improve:

• Interview is Quiet with Disturbing Noise
• On Screen Graphics in Interview aren't Clear
• No Continuance in Font with Crime2Court Logo
• Music stops and Starts
• Some Shots Still Missing
• Interview is too Long/Needs cutaways and shortening (see Coppers)
• Voice Over Style Needs Adjusting
• Police Station needs Establishing Shots